Kia Ora!
If I had a beast it would have angel wings (black)
1.Yellow Halo
2.Demi Jeans with rips in the knees
3. Blonde Hair and black tips
4.Purple Horns
5. Black and Purple shirt (teared)
6.Red Eyes!
7. Half Demon
8. Super Powers: Mind Reading.
This is not the beast I wanted
Hello again Keisha,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading about your Fantastic Beast and I especially think that its superpower would be extremely helpful when he is out on adventures. Does your beast have a name? What is its favourite thing to do?
Well done on using lots of adjectives (descriptive words) to explain his appearance. It would also have been very interesting if you could expand your list by putting these characteristics in to full sentences!
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Looking forward to reading more of your blog posts Keisha,
Happy blogging!
From Susie
I love your description Keisha. I'm trying to picture what that would look like in my head. I wonder if you could create a google drawing of it to demonstrate your idea.
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