Hello keisha, poor animals, I am angry that the animals was sad, but I am glad that the fire is over now. Maybe you can add some animals to it? if you wood like some animals you can asc me to make them. biy Keisha!
Hey Keisha its Aryan here checking out your blog! Good job on putting all the punctuation in. Next time change the color so its a bit easier to read. Anyways awesome post!
Hey Keisha nice work but change the background and add some more information next time but if you make it into a story that would have been interesting. bye.
Bonjour Keisha Sita here! I really like your story that you have wrote its very interesting! I like how you wrote how the animals felt it adds a lot more infomation! I also like how you have added photos of the fire it shows other people from other countrys or other schools in New Zealand that dosent live in Christchurch what it looked like! There is one little problem, the writting is kind of hard to read thanks to the background colors. I have a question, could you see the fire smoke from outside your house? keep up the FANTASTIC work! Au Revoir! :)
Hi Keish it's me Elham. I like the pictures that you have used in you slide because it tells me what you have written about. Next time put more information when you are writing a blog post so we can know what it is about. Blog you later!
Greetings Keisha! I really like your recount about the port hill fire , to be honest I was really worried about the animals too! I also really liked the backgrounds maybe you could find a better one so you can see the words.
Hey its Camryn I read your story abut the fire the slide was really good I wish that I cood be like you mabe next time you code pot a fire in the back grand
Hello keisha,
ReplyDeletepoor animals, I am angry that the animals was sad, but I am glad that the fire is over now.
Maybe you can add some animals to it?
if you wood like some animals you can asc me to make them.
biy Keisha!
Hi keisha freedom here i love your work and i never seen work like your.
ReplyDeleteHey Keisha its Aryan here checking out your blog!
ReplyDeleteGood job on putting all the punctuation in.
Next time change the color so its a bit easier to read.
Anyways awesome post!
Hey Keisha nice work but change the background and add some more information next time but if you make it into a story that would have been interesting.
ReplyDeletebye.
Bonjour Keisha Sita here!
ReplyDeleteI really like your story that you have wrote its very interesting! I like how you wrote how the animals felt it adds a lot more infomation! I also like how you have added photos of the fire it shows other people from other countrys or other schools in New Zealand that dosent live in Christchurch what it looked like! There is one little problem, the writting is kind of hard to read thanks to the background colors. I have a question, could you see the fire smoke from outside your house?
keep up the FANTASTIC work!
Au Revoir! :)
Hi Keish it's me Elham.
ReplyDeleteI like the pictures that you have used in you slide because it tells me what you have written about.
Next time put more information when you are writing a blog post so we can know what it is about.
Blog you later!
nice job with the port hill fire poor animals i wish they were safe.
ReplyDeleteGreetings Keisha! I really like your recount about the port hill fire , to be honest I was really worried about the animals too! I also really liked the backgrounds maybe you could find a better one so you can see the words.
ReplyDeleteGday Keisha it's Jake here.
ReplyDeleteI like your images and your background they pretty cool.
next time be aware of your background and text.
bye.
hi keisha that sad that the sheep/cows got let behind :( bye
ReplyDeleteHey its Camryn I read your story abut the fire the slide was really good I wish that I cood be like you mabe next time you code pot a fire in the back grand
ReplyDeleteHi keisha it's Emalea here.
ReplyDeleteI like the existing words in your story!
The fire must have been big!!
Hey Everyone! -That commented-
ReplyDeleteIll change the background
And Thank you for telling me!!
From Keisha