First I was flicking through a book.
Then I just got a papercut.’’Oh no!’’
It hurt so much it felt like my hand fell off. Then I was screaming. Then I fainted for 1 hour. Then I woke up in the hospital.I was very scared. I was in my stationary room. It was a mess! I felt blood going down my hand. I was moving my finger . Then I said ‘’Oh’’! Then started all over again. After my dad took me back home.
Then I never had a papercut again!
Hi Keisha, my name is Aja, and I go to Waima School. I am feeling you here because I get a lot of papercuts. They are so annoying don't you think. I really think that you should have put more like style and adjectives in this short story, to make the reader want to read it straight away. But they probably will, because your title just says it all. I hope you visit my blog, copy and paste this into the URL:
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I like the story it looks cool keep it up by bailey.
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